Walt: keep your eye on the ball
today i catch lots of balls and i got lots of people out
and i like it
keep your eye on the ball
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Walt: keep your eye on the ball
today i catch lots of balls and i got lots of people out
and i like it
keep your eye on the ball
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ReplyDeleteHello, Sam I'm Sonny from Rawhiti School. I really like how you added a picture it made it a lot more interesting. Next time you could maybe add a bit more writing about the cricket. How much times did you catch the ball?
ReplyDeleteHi Sam my name is Dylan from Rawhiti School. We also had the inflatable cricket at at our school I played on it was so much fun. I caught it 4 times in a row. Maybe next time you can add some more writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Dylan thank for your comment i caught the ball 3 times.
Deletei did not right much i did have a lot of time. i play rugby,
do you play cricket?
Hi Sam,I quite like this post because you put a good WALT and i liked how you put a photo on. Maybe next time you could put a bit more imformation in.Other then that it was a really good post,I remember when i did that it was really fun.
ReplyDeleteDid you find it fun and why?
Hi Sam, I like how you were keeping your eye on the ball for the picture.I liked how you pu tthe little advice down the bootem saying keep your eye on the ball next time you could say how much you caught.What was your faviourate part about catching the ball?
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