problem, introduce the character, describe the setting write a solution.
what you enjoy pictures to make my writing better.
l fond withing hard it hurts my hand
how did you do in your writing?
Zombie pack
zombie . lucky got bitten by the zombie lucky is a zombie samar. Start building dead sam, ALEX, OK and bryce build to sead sam ok said bryce i will hold them off said sam ok i am getting anyar to be citun … i cunt hold them off enemore ok get building final we are done come on and help me we have killed all of the zombie but one i will kill the last one I have killed the last we stood get out of her ok have you got every theik let can have his look around for some other people look there is a boy how svier the zombie come with us we ain't zombie we have a ferid you don't only if you want to ok thank you 
hi sam kalem hare I like the zomdie pack sam
ReplyDeleteHi Sam Jayden here from New Brighton Catholic school I really like this narrative because it was really descriptive. I think you could work on using more punctuation in your writing. I think I did pretty good in my writing.Why did you write about this?
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ReplyDeletei like what you wrote but how you speal my name is lochy not lucky ok bud
ReplyDeleteps i love your work